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Lời người post: Mảnh đất nơi muối xát vết thương là fic của tác giả viết Quốc chi lợi nhận. Bối cảnh là sau khi quân đội Mỹ rút khỏi Iraq, Tôn - thành viên tổ chức Bác sĩ không biên giới - và Lạc - một phóng viên chiến trường - tình cờ gặp nhau. Vì bối cảnh đặc thù của fic nên trong fic có rất nhiều địa danh tại Iraq, tên các tộc người ở vùng Trung Đông. mà QT không dịch ra được. Bất ngờ là gu gồ translate lại dịch fic này một cách rất mượt mà. Vậy nên mình quyết định up bản convert từ tiếng Trung sang tiếng Anh lên cho mọi người cùng đọc, hi vọng sẽ giúp mọi người đọc fic thấy hay hơn
Bản convert này được kết hợp từ kết quả của google translate và sogou.fanyi, ngoài ra mình cũng tự sửa mấy lỗi nhân xưng nhỏ.
Link gốc của tác phẩm ở đây (hi vọng có ai đó sẽ hứng thú chọn edit/dịch câu chuyện này)
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Land of Salt and Scorch
Posted 16 days ago 104 views
LOFTER homepage: deleted number
Word Count: 20660
Keywords of this article: modern; single cp;
We can’t be sure that making a sound will save lives, but we know that keeping silence can kill people.
——Dr. Robinski, Chairman of the International Parliament of Doctors Without Borders
>> Kirkuk Lament
The first time they met was on June 20, 2012, six months and two days had passed since the United States withdrew from Iraq.
However, for the Iraqi people, the nightmare never seemed to end. Artillery can destroy the local social order and infrastructure in an instant, but the declaration to withdraw the troops cannot restore the fragmentation of this place overnight. The eight-year war has left a huge wound that cannot be healed in this country. The streets of the prosperous and wealthy cities of the past are now all withered and bleak.
Zhang Jiale's local guide is a young man under 25 years old. The guide has a very tall body and skin tanned by the sun in northeast Iraq. "No one is a good thing" is his mantra.
"No one is a good thing," they were walking on the streets of Kirkuk's downtown that day because Zhang Jiale was invited to take a group of photos about post-war Iraq. When passing the business center of this oil town, the guide said to him: "Before the Americans came, we lived with a nightmare day. But after the Americans came, we didn't even have a day."
"They ruined everything." The Arab guy said.
Zhang Jiale made two steps around the dilapidated shopping mall door, trying to find an optimal shooting angle. Hearing this summary, he turned around and asked, "Who ruined these?"
The young man was silent for a while, "War." He said, "War destroys us."
Out of the instinctive sensitivity of his career, Zhang Jiale turned this sentence over and over in his heart for a while. The local guide neither nominated Saddam Hussein nor said he was American. Obviously, after today ’s war, the mood of the locals is still very complicated for these two. He secretly made a note in his heart, thinking about how he would discuss this issue with the locals in the future.
"You may be able to shoot across the street." The guide watched him move back and forth, shrugging impatiently, "Then I can show you other places."
Kirkuk in June had an average daily temperature of 39.8 degrees, and the scorching sun burned their naked skin like fireballs in the air. Zhang Jiale's shirt had been soaked for a long time, and there were large pieces of white crystals attached to his dry and wet back.
"Soon," the young reporter from China crouched down and pressed the shutter again: "It will be fine soon."
The guide mumbled a few words in Arabic and turned to a small shop across the street to buy Coke.
"I'm waiting for you across the street." He said.
Under the blue sky and the white sky, the explosion happened in an instant.
Zhang Jiale only heard a thunderous loud noise, and the strong shock wave generated by the bomb detonation had overturned him to the ground. He almost instinctively reached out to protect the camera, so he could only let his arms and body hit the ground like a bag of flour thrown out of the high-speed carriage.
"I am ..."
The bright and non-negligible pain prevented Zhang Jiale from making two swear words in his native language. While trying to get up from the ground, he tried to get rid of the palpitations and fear of being attacked for the rest of his life. "Hassan!" He shouted the wizard's name aloud in Arabic in the smoke and panic crying, "Hey, can you hear me? Hassan?"
The direction of the thick smoke was still more than 20 meters away from them. While Zhang Jiale was anxiously searching for the missing guide, he did not forget to take several photos in a row in the direction of the fire.
Okay, car bomb. A small, numb, sharp voice slipped through his heart, another.
The police who heard the news had begun to evacuate and drive away the crowd. "Leave, leave here!" They saw Zhang Jiale as an Asian journalist and shouted to him in half-baked English: "It's dangerous in front!
Zhang Jiale's six-year career as a field reporter made it clear that the ultra-high temperature brought by car bombs often has the risk of detonating the fuel tanks of other vehicles-but he can't just leave.
"My guide is still inside," he explained to the police more and more in Arabic, "He may have been injured! I saw him walking in this direction before the explosion!"
It may indeed be as Zhang Jiale's classmates said, he has a flattering face. The police looked at him and the camera in his hand. "Ten minutes," the old policewoman said, "Allah bless you."
Zhang Jiale didn't use it for ten minutes. Not far away, he saw his guide blasted by an explosive shock wave under another overturned car. The Arab boy was badly injured, and Zhang Jiale could only judge the life and death of the temporary colleague by his barely still chest. He stood up and shouted for help, waving his hands desperately like a flag, so that the medical staff who were checking the wounded would find them.
Half an hour later, they were taken to the local hospital along with other wounded on the scene.
"I heard the sound of an explosion." Zhang Jiale was exhausted by countless repetitions. "I didn't see suspicious characters. Yes, I was a reporter. I didn't interview anyone. I was filming the building diagonally opposite the explosion point. No, No."
The police and the Iraqi government intelligence personnel in Kirkuk changed in a row after another in front of him. They are interrogating all the witnesses at the scene. And this only made Zhang Jiale feel very and very tired-his nervous nerves along the way finally slackened after hearing the doctor declare that his guide's life was intact, and now he just wanted to find a place to fall asleep.
"He needs treatment and rest, not constant questioning."A doctor with a typical Asian appearance came up with a cart. The man was fluent in English, but his tone was not very kind: "If you allow me, can I treat my patient?"
Zhang Jiale intuitively believed that the "patient" was not referring to himself, so he voluntarily gave way to the side so as to make room for doctors-Kirkuk's medical system has been paralyzed for a long time, the only hospital in the city has a serious shortage of beds, and those who do not lack arms or legs can basically only make do in the treatment room or ward corridor.
Unexpectedly, the doctor laughed twice and reached for his arm, breaking away the arm he was holding the camera: "Don't you feel any pain?"
Zhang Jiale lowered his head and found that the outside of his left arm was already covered with blood. He was stunned for a moment before he remembered that when he fell to the ground, he blocked the camera with his arm.
He stretched out his left arm slightly, but his right hand still held the camera firmly, like a defending gesture: "I was too nervous just now, I didn't notice."
The doctor checked and confirmed that no glass or other debris remained in the wound, and began to clean up the wound. It took less than a second for the hydrogen peroxide to hit the wound, and he listened to this person with a long breath of air: "Dammit it hurts !!"
This blurted-out Chinese made the doctor's movement stop: "Are you Chinese?"
The hydrogen peroxide cotton ball still wiping the wound hurt Zhang Jiale like a fish stranded on the shore. He was all wrinkled together beautifully, like a dried flower dewatered (more like his white shirt stained with blood). As he desperately inhaled into his lungs, he nodded scribbled.
"Oh," the doctor changed a cotton ball and pressed it up again without hesitation: "Me too."
When Zhang Jiale finally relieved his pain, the medicine and bandaging on his arm had been completed. "Change the medicine once a day," the doctor wrote a string of characters on the paper that Zhang Jiale didn't understand at all: "Don't get wet, don't expose the wound to unclean environment, don't tear it after scabbing, don't rub it after itching."
The doctor's white waistcoat had a red graffiti logo printed on his chest, and the black words Médecins Sans Frontières were clearly legible. In MSF's iconic white waistcoat, the man was wearing a military green T-shirt, with well-defined upper arm muscles in slightly tight cuffs and a light-colored long scar on his right wrist. Judging from his appearance alone, he seems more like a soldier than a doctor.
"If you don't have anything unclear, you can leave now." He threw the written prescription on Zhang Jiale and added a smile. ""By the way, since the memory card has been replaced in the ambulance, don't hold the camera so tightly anymore. Overacting will also arouse suspicion."
He uses Chinese for this sentence.
Obviously, Zhang Jiale, who hadn't expected her swapping plan to be seen, felt a little awkward. But he immediately put the camera into his backpack without changing his face: "Thank you."
The doctor just waved his hand and hurried to the next casualty.
"Be careful on the road."
In the groaning and crying in the hospital corridor, the doctor finally said such a sentence.
The Kirkuk car bombing that day killed 70 people and injured more than 180 people.
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Lời người post: Mảnh đất nơi muối xát vết thương là fic của tác giả viết Quốc chi lợi nhận. Bối cảnh là sau khi quân đội Mỹ rút khỏi Iraq, Tôn - thành viên tổ chức Bác sĩ không biên giới - và Lạc - một phóng viên chiến trường - tình cờ gặp nhau. Vì bối cảnh đặc thù của fic nên trong fic có rất nhiều địa danh tại Iraq, tên các tộc người ở vùng Trung Đông. mà QT không dịch ra được. Bất ngờ là gu gồ translate lại dịch fic này một cách rất mượt mà. Vậy nên mình quyết định up bản convert từ tiếng Trung sang tiếng Anh lên cho mọi người cùng đọc, hi vọng sẽ giúp mọi người đọc fic thấy hay hơn
Bản convert này được kết hợp từ kết quả của google translate và sogou.fanyi, ngoài ra mình cũng tự sửa mấy lỗi nhân xưng nhỏ.
Link gốc của tác phẩm ở đây (hi vọng có ai đó sẽ hứng thú chọn edit/dịch câu chuyện này)
..............................
Land of Salt and Scorch
Posted 16 days ago 104 views
Author: pika02 / flowers PlanetLOFTER homepage: deleted number
Word Count: 20660
Keywords of this article: modern; single cp;
We can’t be sure that making a sound will save lives, but we know that keeping silence can kill people.
——Dr. Robinski, Chairman of the International Parliament of Doctors Without Borders
>> Kirkuk Lament
The first time they met was on June 20, 2012, six months and two days had passed since the United States withdrew from Iraq.
However, for the Iraqi people, the nightmare never seemed to end. Artillery can destroy the local social order and infrastructure in an instant, but the declaration to withdraw the troops cannot restore the fragmentation of this place overnight. The eight-year war has left a huge wound that cannot be healed in this country. The streets of the prosperous and wealthy cities of the past are now all withered and bleak.
Zhang Jiale's local guide is a young man under 25 years old. The guide has a very tall body and skin tanned by the sun in northeast Iraq. "No one is a good thing" is his mantra.
"No one is a good thing," they were walking on the streets of Kirkuk's downtown that day because Zhang Jiale was invited to take a group of photos about post-war Iraq. When passing the business center of this oil town, the guide said to him: "Before the Americans came, we lived with a nightmare day. But after the Americans came, we didn't even have a day."
"They ruined everything." The Arab guy said.
Zhang Jiale made two steps around the dilapidated shopping mall door, trying to find an optimal shooting angle. Hearing this summary, he turned around and asked, "Who ruined these?"
The young man was silent for a while, "War." He said, "War destroys us."
Out of the instinctive sensitivity of his career, Zhang Jiale turned this sentence over and over in his heart for a while. The local guide neither nominated Saddam Hussein nor said he was American. Obviously, after today ’s war, the mood of the locals is still very complicated for these two. He secretly made a note in his heart, thinking about how he would discuss this issue with the locals in the future.
"You may be able to shoot across the street." The guide watched him move back and forth, shrugging impatiently, "Then I can show you other places."
Kirkuk in June had an average daily temperature of 39.8 degrees, and the scorching sun burned their naked skin like fireballs in the air. Zhang Jiale's shirt had been soaked for a long time, and there were large pieces of white crystals attached to his dry and wet back.
"Soon," the young reporter from China crouched down and pressed the shutter again: "It will be fine soon."
The guide mumbled a few words in Arabic and turned to a small shop across the street to buy Coke.
"I'm waiting for you across the street." He said.
Under the blue sky and the white sky, the explosion happened in an instant.
Zhang Jiale only heard a thunderous loud noise, and the strong shock wave generated by the bomb detonation had overturned him to the ground. He almost instinctively reached out to protect the camera, so he could only let his arms and body hit the ground like a bag of flour thrown out of the high-speed carriage.
"I am ..."
The bright and non-negligible pain prevented Zhang Jiale from making two swear words in his native language. While trying to get up from the ground, he tried to get rid of the palpitations and fear of being attacked for the rest of his life. "Hassan!" He shouted the wizard's name aloud in Arabic in the smoke and panic crying, "Hey, can you hear me? Hassan?"
The direction of the thick smoke was still more than 20 meters away from them. While Zhang Jiale was anxiously searching for the missing guide, he did not forget to take several photos in a row in the direction of the fire.
Okay, car bomb. A small, numb, sharp voice slipped through his heart, another.
The police who heard the news had begun to evacuate and drive away the crowd. "Leave, leave here!" They saw Zhang Jiale as an Asian journalist and shouted to him in half-baked English: "It's dangerous in front!
Zhang Jiale's six-year career as a field reporter made it clear that the ultra-high temperature brought by car bombs often has the risk of detonating the fuel tanks of other vehicles-but he can't just leave.
"My guide is still inside," he explained to the police more and more in Arabic, "He may have been injured! I saw him walking in this direction before the explosion!"
It may indeed be as Zhang Jiale's classmates said, he has a flattering face. The police looked at him and the camera in his hand. "Ten minutes," the old policewoman said, "Allah bless you."
Zhang Jiale didn't use it for ten minutes. Not far away, he saw his guide blasted by an explosive shock wave under another overturned car. The Arab boy was badly injured, and Zhang Jiale could only judge the life and death of the temporary colleague by his barely still chest. He stood up and shouted for help, waving his hands desperately like a flag, so that the medical staff who were checking the wounded would find them.
Half an hour later, they were taken to the local hospital along with other wounded on the scene.
"I heard the sound of an explosion." Zhang Jiale was exhausted by countless repetitions. "I didn't see suspicious characters. Yes, I was a reporter. I didn't interview anyone. I was filming the building diagonally opposite the explosion point. No, No."
The police and the Iraqi government intelligence personnel in Kirkuk changed in a row after another in front of him. They are interrogating all the witnesses at the scene. And this only made Zhang Jiale feel very and very tired-his nervous nerves along the way finally slackened after hearing the doctor declare that his guide's life was intact, and now he just wanted to find a place to fall asleep.
"He needs treatment and rest, not constant questioning."A doctor with a typical Asian appearance came up with a cart. The man was fluent in English, but his tone was not very kind: "If you allow me, can I treat my patient?"
Zhang Jiale intuitively believed that the "patient" was not referring to himself, so he voluntarily gave way to the side so as to make room for doctors-Kirkuk's medical system has been paralyzed for a long time, the only hospital in the city has a serious shortage of beds, and those who do not lack arms or legs can basically only make do in the treatment room or ward corridor.
Unexpectedly, the doctor laughed twice and reached for his arm, breaking away the arm he was holding the camera: "Don't you feel any pain?"
Zhang Jiale lowered his head and found that the outside of his left arm was already covered with blood. He was stunned for a moment before he remembered that when he fell to the ground, he blocked the camera with his arm.
He stretched out his left arm slightly, but his right hand still held the camera firmly, like a defending gesture: "I was too nervous just now, I didn't notice."
The doctor checked and confirmed that no glass or other debris remained in the wound, and began to clean up the wound. It took less than a second for the hydrogen peroxide to hit the wound, and he listened to this person with a long breath of air: "Dammit it hurts !!"
This blurted-out Chinese made the doctor's movement stop: "Are you Chinese?"
The hydrogen peroxide cotton ball still wiping the wound hurt Zhang Jiale like a fish stranded on the shore. He was all wrinkled together beautifully, like a dried flower dewatered (more like his white shirt stained with blood). As he desperately inhaled into his lungs, he nodded scribbled.
"Oh," the doctor changed a cotton ball and pressed it up again without hesitation: "Me too."
When Zhang Jiale finally relieved his pain, the medicine and bandaging on his arm had been completed. "Change the medicine once a day," the doctor wrote a string of characters on the paper that Zhang Jiale didn't understand at all: "Don't get wet, don't expose the wound to unclean environment, don't tear it after scabbing, don't rub it after itching."
The doctor's white waistcoat had a red graffiti logo printed on his chest, and the black words Médecins Sans Frontières were clearly legible. In MSF's iconic white waistcoat, the man was wearing a military green T-shirt, with well-defined upper arm muscles in slightly tight cuffs and a light-colored long scar on his right wrist. Judging from his appearance alone, he seems more like a soldier than a doctor.
"If you don't have anything unclear, you can leave now." He threw the written prescription on Zhang Jiale and added a smile. ""By the way, since the memory card has been replaced in the ambulance, don't hold the camera so tightly anymore. Overacting will also arouse suspicion."
He uses Chinese for this sentence.
Obviously, Zhang Jiale, who hadn't expected her swapping plan to be seen, felt a little awkward. But he immediately put the camera into his backpack without changing his face: "Thank you."
The doctor just waved his hand and hurried to the next casualty.
"Be careful on the road."
In the groaning and crying in the hospital corridor, the doctor finally said such a sentence.
The Kirkuk car bombing that day killed 70 people and injured more than 180 people.
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